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Post by Mz_U Mon Feb 25, 2008 4:41 am

Pause, break
If only for my sake
Turn around and walk don't you dare look back
cause I’m still wheeling from your last attack
What, wait
You say this is fate
You think you're all that and you're mighty fine
You think that ill die if I don’t make you all mine
Slowly unwind
I’ve made up my mind
That thing in my chest well it aint got no feeling
cause from then till now believe me I’m still healing
So I get colder as I grow older
with each vile encounter do I get bolder
Cause I’ve been there before
But no more no more


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Post by Guest Mon Feb 25, 2008 2:29 pm

this is deep...nice...keep it up hun

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Post by HotSteppa Mon Feb 25, 2008 11:03 pm

Love this poem .... Grl this is really deep

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Post by Mz_U Tue Feb 26, 2008 1:23 am

Thankx much ... one of my favs too .. got others I'll add later
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Post by dBosS Tue Feb 26, 2008 1:24 am

mad!! jus creative i tell ya...hurry up a write a next
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Post by djvenom Tue Feb 26, 2008 1:02 pm

good stuff , looks like we have a lot a writers here cheers afro
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Post by Ms. Kitty Tue Feb 26, 2008 7:44 pm

not bad ^_^
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Post by STATIcK Wed Feb 27, 2008 3:40 am

wow, its like real wide, it could mean so many things but all these things point to one. real great, really good
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Post by STATIcK Wed Feb 27, 2008 3:41 am

this type of writing is really interesting, ill keep it in mind
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Post by Mz_U Wed Feb 27, 2008 3:41 am

THANKS HON .... IM HUNGRYYYYY
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